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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 25 조회 14160

The movie which I saw recently

작성자: 72153 담당 튜터: Jae
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The movie which I saw recently is mungyang(명량)
lending actor'name is chul min sik(최민식)

----below his picture's url
http://www.google.co.kr/imgres?imgurl=http://www.extmovie.com/xe/files/attach/images/170/113/055/cf8a11eff4933b5aa730d6f23785ce47.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.extmovie.com/xe/article/55113&h=189&w=267&tbnid=qk27UY2sIR28rM:&zoom=1&tbnh=141&tbnw=200&usg=__GvLY_p8g99hRno51Ab7Eu2nexMs=&docid=PJeruVySGwnRtM&itg=1&ved=0CJIBEMo3&ei=RpQjVMb4F5Hk8AWorYAY
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The main character of the Movie is admiral fleet commander 'Lee sun sin(이순신)
튜터 교정 답변

The movie which I saw recently is mungyang(명량) lending actor'name is chul min sik(최민식) ----below his picture's url http://www.google.co.kr/imgres?imgurl=http://www.extmovie.com/xe/files/attach/images/170/113/055/cf8a11eff4933b5aa730d6f23785ce47.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.extmovie.com/xe/article/55113&h=189&w=267&tbnid=qk27UY2sIR28rM:&zoom=1&tbnh=141&tbnw=200&usg=__GvLY_p8g99hRno51Ab7Eu2nexMs=&docid=PJeruVySGwnRtM&itg=1&ved=0CJIBEMo3&ei=RpQjVMb4F5Hk8AWorYAY --------------------------------------------- The main character of the Movie is admiral fleet commander 'Lee sun sin(이순신)

Correction: 

The movie which I saw recently was Mungyang(명량) and the leading actor's name is Chul Min Sik.(최민식) 

MESSAGE:

Shawn, Thank you so much for recommending this movie. I'll try to watch this movie. :)

Have a blessed Thursday! See you next class! ^_^

Take care, 
Teacher Jae ♥

 

 

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