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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 25 조회 13655

Writing

작성자: 1100515682 담당 튜터: Wynston2
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I like to write letters by my hand. When i write a letter by my hand, the person who gets the letter would be moved. I can send my own words on letter. I think my last letter writing was about one year ago. I really dont like to write. It takes a long time and hard thinking to write. Most of all in now a days we take a touch with KAKAO TALK so we are getting far away from writing.
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I like to write letters by my hand. When i I write a letterS THIS WAY, by my hand, the person who RECEIVES IT gets the letter would be APPRECIATES THAT IT MUST BE PERSONAL, AND FROM MY HEART, AND THEREFORE IS moved BY IT. I can send my own words on letter. I thinkTHAT THE  my last letter writing I WROTE was about one A year ago. I really don't like to write. It takes a long time and REQUIRES LOTS OF hard thinking. to write. Most of all in Nowadays THE COMMON WAY TO WRITE OTHERS AND STAY  IN TOUCH, IS THROUGH we take a touch with KAKAO TALK, so PEOPLE we are getting far away from writing LETTERS.

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