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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 09. 26 조회 13160

HEALTH

작성자: 1100515682 담당 튜터: Wynston2
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I dont do any exercise for my health. But i play a soccer and baseball at my P.E. We have a P.E time twice in a week. I think most of Korean high school students are very busy so they cant exercise everday. Ovbiously we don't think about our health.
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I don't do any exercise for my health. But i I play a soccer and baseball at my during P.E, which we have a P.E time twice in a week. I think most of Korean high school students are very busy, so they can't exercise everday. Ovbiously Obviously we don't think about our health.

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