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[CORRECTIONS]

#5 How was it? Was it helpful for you to remind that days?

-> #5 How was it? Was it helpful for you to remind those days?

In my case, I learned and learned again to become a great computer programmer.

-> In my case, I kept on learning over and over to become a great computer programmer.

#6 June to November. It was a period for Greenlight As known as a mentoring for freshmen.

-> From June to November, it was a period for Greenlight also known as a mentoring for freshmen.

One of my senior co-worker was a Mentor for me. He did teach me about development skills, how to communicate inside the company,

-> One of my senior co-workers my mentor. He taught me about development skills, how to communicate inside the company,

and many more tips for overall company life. #7 And then, I joined A.VAS development project.

-> and many more tips for overall company life. #7 Then, I joined A.VAS development project.

Android Validation Automation System. It is a system to check the Apps from the app store whether it works or not.

-> Android Validation Automation System. It is a system to check the Apps from the app store whether it works or not. (no lapses)

There were so many skilled seniors so I could learn much from them.

-> There were so many skilled seniors, so I could learn much from them. (no lapses)

#8 And next month, I took a off-line class for one week about C# which is the language used in A.VAS system.

-> And next month, I took an off-line class for one week about C# which is the language used in A.VAS system.

#9 In november, I participated in Cresentation and won 2nd place.

-> In november, I participated in Cresentation and won 2nd place. (no lapses)

I learned much about presentation at a coaching class just before the final competition and during the whole 3 months of preparation.

-> I learned much about presentation at a coaching class, just before the final competition and during the whole 3 months of preparation. (no lapses)