25~28
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
#25
We can do all these great things, with just adding KEYWORD.
#26(Video playing)
To be a tree, it news water, sun lights, wind, rain, nutritions and many more things.
Human is same also.
I can be s sun, water, sometime a wind, rain for someone I meet and vice versa.
People should be connected.
#27
Through KEYWORD.
#28
If you have any questions please feel free to ask me.
We can do all these great things, with just adding KEYWORD.
#26(Video playing)
To be a tree, it news water, sun lights, wind, rain, nutritions and many more things.
Human is same also.
I can be s sun, water, sometime a wind, rain for someone I meet and vice versa.
People should be connected.
#27
Through KEYWORD.
#28
If you have any questions please feel free to ask me.
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