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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 10. 01 조회 12789

Describe a picture

작성자: pos500383 담당 튜터: Wynston1
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This picture has been taken a indoor which is a office.
In the foreground, there are three men. They are talking each other. Left hand side, a man is wearing dark dress suit and shoes, and he is leaning a cabinet. Right hand side, a man is wearing a white shirts.
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This picture has been taken a indoors which is IN aN office. In the foreground, there are three men. They are talking TO each other. ON THE Left hand side, a man is wearing A dark dress suit and shoes, and he is leaning AGAINST a cabinet. Right hand side, a man is wearing a white shirts.

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