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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 10. 02 조회 13575

I wrote my answer, beacause I thought my answer was so weak.

작성자: 1100124194 담당 튜터: Nancy1
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Firstly, Reading a newspaper gives me a lot of information about many things and people all over the world. In the past, I should buy a newspaper to read it, thesedays, I can read it anywhere, anytime because of a cell phone. That's realllllly nice.
Secondly, it seems like reading a newspaper develop english skills. I can learn new words, and expressions as well.
Lastly, when I talk with colleagues, I can lead a conversation as I give them various interesting information.
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Firstly, Reading a newspaper gives me a lot of information about many things and people all over the world. In the past, I would buy a newspaper to read it. These days, I can read it anywhere or  anytime because of a cell phone. That's really nice. Secondly, it seems like reading a newspaper can develop your English skills. I can learn new words, and expressions as well. Lastly, when I talk with colleagues, I can lead a conversation as I give them various interesting information.

 

 

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