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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 10. 06 조회 12647

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작성자: 118406 담당 튜터: Wynston2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
"Work"
We usually have an hour for lunch break. I usually eat with my coworkers in my department.
Without special occasion, we go down to the company cafeteria, and buy food the cafeteria provides. the cafeteria provides about 8 dishes, mainely Korean foods, some are American style dishes. I usually eat Korean dishes, but sometimes eat American style dishes. We can use it with company ID card.
After eating lunch, I usally walk around my company building several blocks about 20 to 40 minites. I have this walking habit because I think walking is good for health. When I walk with company coworkers we like to talk about my company because it is something we have in common.
But, sometimes I walk alone. In this case, I usually listen to MP3 for studying Chinese embedded in Smart phone. After walking, in the office, I have telephone call for Chinese. Chinese teacher in Chingdao calls me 10 minutes in a day.
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"Work"

We usually have an hour for lunch break. I usually eat with my coworkers in my department. Without special occasion, we go down to the company cafeteria, and buy food WHICH the cafeteria provides; The cafeteria provides about 8 dishes, mainely Korean foods, some are AND SEVERAL American style dishes. I usually eat Korean dishes, but sometimes eat American style dishes. We can use it  COMPANY CAFETERIA with company ID card. After eating lunch, I usUally walk around my company building several blocks, FOR about 20 to 40 minites. MINUTES. I have this walking habit because I think walking IT is good for health. When I walk with company coworkers we like to talk about my company because it is something we have in common. But sometimes I walk alone. In this case, I usually listen to MY MP3 TO studying Chinese, WHICH LESSONS ARE embedded in MY Smart phone. After walking, in the office, MY CHINESE TEACHER CALLS ME OVER THE PHONE FROM CHINGDAO FOR 10 MINUTE DAILY SESSIONS I have A  telephone CHINESE LEARNING SESSION BY PHONE call for Chinese. Chinese teacher in Chingdao calls me 10 minutes in a day.

 

 

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