Work
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
"Work"
We usually have an hour for lunch break. I usually eat with my coworkers in my department.
Without special occasion, we go down to the company cafeteria, and buy food the cafeteria provides. the cafeteria provides about 8 dishes, mainely Korean foods, some are American style dishes. I usually eat Korean dishes, but sometimes eat American style dishes. We can use it with company ID card.
After eating lunch, I usally walk around my company building several blocks about 20 to 40 minites. I have this walking habit because I think walking is good for health. When I walk with company coworkers we like to talk about my company because it is something we have in common.
But, sometimes I walk alone. In this case, I usually listen to MP3 for studying Chinese embedded in Smart phone. After walking, in the office, I have telephone call for Chinese. Chinese teacher in Chingdao calls me 10 minutes in a day.
We usually have an hour for lunch break. I usually eat with my coworkers in my department.
Without special occasion, we go down to the company cafeteria, and buy food the cafeteria provides. the cafeteria provides about 8 dishes, mainely Korean foods, some are American style dishes. I usually eat Korean dishes, but sometimes eat American style dishes. We can use it with company ID card.
After eating lunch, I usally walk around my company building several blocks about 20 to 40 minites. I have this walking habit because I think walking is good for health. When I walk with company coworkers we like to talk about my company because it is something we have in common.
But, sometimes I walk alone. In this case, I usually listen to MP3 for studying Chinese embedded in Smart phone. After walking, in the office, I have telephone call for Chinese. Chinese teacher in Chingdao calls me 10 minutes in a day.
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