Presentation materials_Introduction part
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Introduction Part;
Hello, Everyone. I am glad to have an opportunity to present regarding hospitality and ICT today. My name is Kyung eun Hwang working on ST department at Samsung SDS. Before I start this presentation, I would like to give you a brief introduction regarding the topic and target audience, and objectives of this presentation.
The main topic is the Hospitality and ICT incorporation, and the developer and consultants are the target audiences. As per my research for the attendees, they are not familiar with the Hospitality and have no experience of this type of project. Therefore my goal is to deliver the concept of the hospitality to them which they need to be aware of for the future project. and I want to give them an impression that Our company has great capabilities as the ICT consultant and solution provider.
Hello, Everyone. I am glad to have an opportunity to present regarding hospitality and ICT today. My name is Kyung eun Hwang working on ST department at Samsung SDS. Before I start this presentation, I would like to give you a brief introduction regarding the topic and target audience, and objectives of this presentation.
The main topic is the Hospitality and ICT incorporation, and the developer and consultants are the target audiences. As per my research for the attendees, they are not familiar with the Hospitality and have no experience of this type of project. Therefore my goal is to deliver the concept of the hospitality to them which they need to be aware of for the future project. and I want to give them an impression that Our company has great capabilities as the ICT consultant and solution provider.
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