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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 10. 07 조회 13289

My job

작성자: 1102069038 담당 튜터: Charlanna1
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I am working at Samsung Institute of Safety and Environment(SISE).
I am a general manager in the chemicals team.
I have been working here for six months. I just moved to Samsung in May.
My main role as manager here is to coordinate and manage team members' duties,
for example, reviewing plans, checking timelines, confirming the results of projects, etc.
Additionally, I carry out evaluating safety culture on subsidiaries.
I really enjoy my job because I can make a new challenge every year with other project.
튜터 교정 답변

I am currently employed at the Samsung Institute of Safety and Environment(SISE), and I have been with the institute since May. Presently, I am a general manager in the chemicals department. My main role as manager is to coordinate and manage team members' duties. These duties usually involve  reviewing plans, checking timelines, confirming the results of projects and so on. Additionally, I perform safety culture evaluations on subsidiaries. I really enjoy my job because I'm constantly faced with new challenges and projects.

 

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