My project
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As a safety engineer, my job is to evaluate 'Safety Culture' of subsidiaries in Samsung group.
Nowadays I am establishing plan for developing a new program for safety culture evaluation.
It's a new challenge for me to do this kind of project.
Safety culture means "the way we do safety in the company during working".
I hope I can finish it successfully, and it could be helpful to prevent the accidents in my company.
Nowadays I am establishing plan for developing a new program for safety culture evaluation.
It's a new challenge for me to do this kind of project.
Safety culture means "the way we do safety in the company during working".
I hope I can finish it successfully, and it could be helpful to prevent the accidents in my company.
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