Neighborhood
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학생 제출 원문
"Neighborhood"
Because I am so busy, I usually leave my apartment early in the morning and come back late at night. Therefore, I don't see my neighbors often. And each household of my apartment is quite segregated, we seldom meet my neigbors. Sometimes I meet them during the elevator ride. Even I don't realize who are they, they realize me, "say hello". In that case, I was just embarrasing, "say hello" in return.
When I was young, I lived in a detached house. At that time I remembered several neighbors. I even remember some of their faces now. I miss that time, my neighbors meet together.
Because I am so busy, I usually leave my apartment early in the morning and come back late at night. Therefore, I don't see my neighbors often. And each household of my apartment is quite segregated, we seldom meet my neigbors. Sometimes I meet them during the elevator ride. Even I don't realize who are they, they realize me, "say hello". In that case, I was just embarrasing, "say hello" in return.
When I was young, I lived in a detached house. At that time I remembered several neighbors. I even remember some of their faces now. I miss that time, my neighbors meet together.
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