"Watching movies"
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"Watching movies"
I don't like horror movies like "saw", I don't like vilolation. I remembered the "ring", the gost come out of TV.
I like action movies like "Amageddon" the actor "Bruce Willis". He appeared a lot in action movies. I like some sort of Scientific movie like "Starwars", "Starcraft". I also like romantic comedy, like "Groundhog Day", actor is Bill Murray acts Pill Corners . The story is like this: The broadcasting team arrived in a suburban area. Due to sudden heavy snows, they cannot leave that place, that day. The next day comes, they met several happenings that day. After time goes they meet another day. But, every happening is just like yesterday. Funny thing is nobody realizes this except the hero Phill Corners.
I remember the other movie "If Only". In this movie the same day occurs just one more time. The
hero changed their destiny.
I don't like horror movies like "saw", I don't like vilolation. I remembered the "ring", the gost come out of TV.
I like action movies like "Amageddon" the actor "Bruce Willis". He appeared a lot in action movies. I like some sort of Scientific movie like "Starwars", "Starcraft". I also like romantic comedy, like "Groundhog Day", actor is Bill Murray acts Pill Corners . The story is like this: The broadcasting team arrived in a suburban area. Due to sudden heavy snows, they cannot leave that place, that day. The next day comes, they met several happenings that day. After time goes they meet another day. But, every happening is just like yesterday. Funny thing is nobody realizes this except the hero Phill Corners.
I remember the other movie "If Only". In this movie the same day occurs just one more time. The
hero changed their destiny.
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