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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 10. 13 조회 13196

Daily talk (Dental clinic)

작성자: 1101925341 담당 튜터: Christine1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Last week, I went dental clinic.

I used to visit dental clinic for checking up my teeth condition, regularalry.

The atmosphere in clinic was so cozy, but i didn't like the sounds coming frome oprearion rooms.

The reason why I was in there, i though my teeth is getting loose and it needed to be pulled out.

but, Dentist examined my teeth conditions closely, and he told me

that I have a lot of cavity on my teeth and it needed to be clean.

so I had my teeth scaled and got some treatments.

It was not painful but always I have trouble going dental clinic and afraid of being examined my teeths.

After cleaning my teeth, I decided my self to take good care on my teeth,

so I won't spend a lot of money in the future.
튜터 교정 답변

Last week, I went to the dental clinic. I  visit the dental clinic regularly to examine my teeth. The atmosphere at clinic was very cozy; however, I didn't like the sounds coming from the operating rooms.The reason why I went there was because I thought my teeth was getting loose and it needed to be extracted.

The dentist examined my teeth, and he told me that I had a lot of cavities and they needed to be cleaned.The dentist cleaned my teeth  and gave me some treatments. The procedure  was not painful; nevertheless, I  always have trouble going  to  the dental clinic and I am afraid of examining my teeth.

After cleaning my teeth, I decided to take good care of them so that I don't have to spend a lot of money at the dentist in the future.

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