SNS

I like to post things on Social Networking Sites. I always use NAVER's band like Facebook because a lot of interesting functions. This is a kind of SNS. I sometimes post notices to my frend such as where or when shall we meet in regular meeting? Sometimes I send text message to my colleague without extra cost. And I often make use of SNS to study English privately. I post sentences that are important or necessary or my English diary. Then I repeat practice till perfect anywhere, anytime. Using SNS is the best way to make more personal connections regardless of place and time.

1. I like to post things on Social Networking Sites. Good job!

2. I always use NAVER's band like Facebook because a lot of interesting functions. -> I always use NAVER's band like Facebook because it has a lot of interesting functions.

3. This is a kind of SNS. Good job! or better say -> It is a kind of SNS.

4. I sometimes post notices to my frend such as where or when shall we meet in regular meeting? -> I sometimes post notices to my friend such as where or when shall we meet in regular meeting.

5. Sometimes I send text message to my colleague without extra cost. Good job!

6. And I often make use of SNS to study English privately. Good job!

7. I post sentences that are important or necessary or my English diary. Good job! or better say -> I post sentences that are important or necessary on my English diary.

8. Then I repeat practice till perfect anywhere, anytime. -> Then I repeat practice till/until I did it perfect anywhere, anytime.

9. Using SNS is the best way to make more personal connections regardless of place and time.  Good job!

Hi Kent,

Good work! You can really construct good sentences and you also have a good organization. Just be careful in using punctuations and prepositions. Nonetheless, it's a good homework! Good job!