cooking
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I like to cook Korean food.
Most of all I like to cook Kimchi stews because it is very easy to cook them.
They are very common in Korea.
Many people enjoy eating them and there are a lot of famous places where they are made well.
My wife and I often have a dinner with Kimchi stews I make.
As I mentioned, it is easy to cook them.
Kimchi stews normally need just Kimchi.
When you want to eat more deliciously, you can put meat or tofu.
Whenever I eat tasty food, I always feel light and happy.
I will cook delicious Kimchi stews next Sunday.
Most of all I like to cook Kimchi stews because it is very easy to cook them.
They are very common in Korea.
Many people enjoy eating them and there are a lot of famous places where they are made well.
My wife and I often have a dinner with Kimchi stews I make.
As I mentioned, it is easy to cook them.
Kimchi stews normally need just Kimchi.
When you want to eat more deliciously, you can put meat or tofu.
Whenever I eat tasty food, I always feel light and happy.
I will cook delicious Kimchi stews next Sunday.
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