Watching Sports
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I love watch sports games. Especially I love watch soccer, baseball. When I was young in the 20ties, I loved watch baseball games. The time Professional baseball teams are established was in 1980, I remember. There were 7 teams. There were several super heros in most teams. A player's heating rate was more than zero point four. A pitcher's everage saving point was under 1.0. Most exciting games were big match between countries. Several years ago Korea Team won the first prize in Olympic. Pitcher Park in Major league in USA and Ryu now in Major league greatly contributed to Korea even won the strongest Kuba team. Talking about Soccer, Korea had tremendeous plays in 2002 World-Cup held in Korea and Japan. Most Koreans weared red shirts were very delightful several days in all over the country.
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