Pet
I first saw same kind of dog at my neighborhood two years ago so I wanted to raise a dog and I ended up buying a dog at a pet store near my house.
He has white long fur and black eyes.
When it comes to taking cae of puppy, I'm all thumbs but my wife is really handy.
She feeds him three times a day and washes him every day.
But he seems to like me than my wife.
He let me be happy every day as wagging his tail whenever I come into my house.
My wife and I feel happy to keem him.
I own a small and cute puppy. His name is ung-ii and he is Pomeranian with 2 years old. I first saw same kind of dog at my neighborhood two years ago so I wanted to raise a dog and I ended up buying a dog at a pet store near my house. He has white long fur and black eyes. When it comes to taking cae of puppy, I'm all thumbs but my wife is really handy. She feeds him three times a day and washes him every day. But he seems to like me than my wife. He let me be happy every day as wagging his tail whenever I come into my house. My wife and I feel happy to keem him.
1. I own a small and cute puppy. Good job! 
2. His name is ung-ii and he is Pomeranian with 2 years old. -> His name is Ung-ii and he(it) is a 2 year old Pomeranian dog.
3. I first saw same kind of dog at my neighborhood two years ago so I wanted to raise a dog and I ended up buying a dog at a pet store near my house.->
I first a saw same kind of dog in my neighborhood two years ago so I wanted to raise a dog and I ended up buying a dog at a pet store near my house.
4. He has white long fur and black eyes. Good job!
5. When it comes to taking cae of puppy, I'm all thumbs but my wife is really handy. -> When it comes to taking care of puppy, I'm all thumbs up but my wife is really hands-on.
6. She feeds him three times a day and washes him every day. -> Good job ! or BETTER SAY -> She feeds him thrice a day and washes/bathes him every day.
7. But he seems to like me than my wife. Good job!
8. He let me be happy every day as wagging his tail whenever I come into my house. -> He makes me happy everyday by wagging his tail whenever/everytime I'm arriving in my house.
9. My wife and I feel happy to keem him. -> My wife and I feel happy to keep him.
Hi!
Good job! You were albe to compose your thoughts well and transcribe it into good sentences. I can see your improvement so keep it up! Just be careful in spelling and in using the correct tenses of the verb. Nonetheless, this composition is very heart-warming. Keep up the good work! :-)
-Teacher Lovely