Internet
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I am very satisfied with the internet environment in Korea. Korea has been one of the contries that have a most fast internet speed.
Do you know that we already had a facebook like SNS service long before 10 years ago?
Named cyworld, sweeped all over the country at that time, and it was a trend that people put their daily life upon the website and share it with their friends.
Anyway it has disapeared in history, now most korean use NAVER as their search engine and social relation tool. NAVER has a 75% market share in Korea, because NAVER has all of the things that people want. If you know korean character, you don't have to visit other websites for most of the information you want. NAVER has all of it. such as search engine, mail, blog, cafe, news, messanger, game, shopping, map, music, book..
NAVER is my favorite and always to go website.
Do you know that we already had a facebook like SNS service long before 10 years ago?
Named cyworld, sweeped all over the country at that time, and it was a trend that people put their daily life upon the website and share it with their friends.
Anyway it has disapeared in history, now most korean use NAVER as their search engine and social relation tool. NAVER has a 75% market share in Korea, because NAVER has all of the things that people want. If you know korean character, you don't have to visit other websites for most of the information you want. NAVER has all of it. such as search engine, mail, blog, cafe, news, messanger, game, shopping, map, music, book..
NAVER is my favorite and always to go website.
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