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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Good morning to everyone. My name is kyung eun Hwang, and I'm the senior engineer at Smart Town department at Samsung SDS. I very much appreciate this opportunity to provide you a brief presentation on Information & Communication Technology (ICT) implication in THE hospitality industry in terms of virtual concierge and building automation system for Hotel project .
These days ICT trends and customer's needs have been changed rapidly. Therefore developers and consultants has been had difficulties to follow and incorporate the new trends, and it impacts their business. In order to reduce the risk, it is important to seek advice from the ICT consultant. Through this presentation, My goal is to assure you that our company ,Samsung SDS, has great capabilities to be your ICT consultant, and make you to achieve the forefront business in hospitality industry.
These days ICT trends and customer's needs have been changed rapidly. Therefore developers and consultants has been had difficulties to follow and incorporate the new trends, and it impacts their business. In order to reduce the risk, it is important to seek advice from the ICT consultant. Through this presentation, My goal is to assure you that our company ,Samsung SDS, has great capabilities to be your ICT consultant, and make you to achieve the forefront business in hospitality industry.
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