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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
First of all, I'm not a good cook. If I need to cook, I always choose a simple food such as sandwich or ramen.
When my wife's first birthday, I promised my wife to cook for her.
I tried to cook seaweed soup. The problem was that I naver cook it before.
So I looked for the recipe online. It was simpler than I thought that it would be.
All told, You have to adjust a quantity of seaweed carefully. Because seaweed was dried.
After cooking, It billowed almost 10 times.
So I put seaweed in the pot very carefully. I also put soy source, anchovy and slice beef in the pot.
Then, I covered.
After a few minutes, I opened it. But I barely found seaweed in the soup.
I was overly cautious. It was just a little salty water.
Anyway, my wife and I enjoy the meal with the soup and bunch of side dishes.
After that my wife doesn't want me to cook anymore.
It was my first and last time cooking.
Thankyou.
When my wife's first birthday, I promised my wife to cook for her.
I tried to cook seaweed soup. The problem was that I naver cook it before.
So I looked for the recipe online. It was simpler than I thought that it would be.
All told, You have to adjust a quantity of seaweed carefully. Because seaweed was dried.
After cooking, It billowed almost 10 times.
So I put seaweed in the pot very carefully. I also put soy source, anchovy and slice beef in the pot.
Then, I covered.
After a few minutes, I opened it. But I barely found seaweed in the soup.
I was overly cautious. It was just a little salty water.
Anyway, my wife and I enjoy the meal with the soup and bunch of side dishes.
After that my wife doesn't want me to cook anymore.
It was my first and last time cooking.
Thankyou.
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