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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 10. 17 조회 13186

Unit 13

작성자: HWMC201200797 담당 튜터: Wynston2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I watch many movies these days. But I watched it from the internet download website. When I had a girlfriend, I often went to theater. But, I don't have girlfriend now, so I don't go there. And I don't like going to watch movies with men friends. When I meet my men friends, there are many many interesting things we play pleasantly instead of watching movies. I like big scale movies such as SF, war, action. Therefore, when I watch movies in my room with my laptop, I can't feel reality with that kind of movies. My favorite movie is AVATAR. After I watched the movie first time, I was surprised about the effects, scale, graphic. It is totally fantastic movie!
튜터 교정 답변

I watch many movies these days, but I watched it from the internet download websiteS. When I had a girlfriend, I often went to theater, but, AS I don't have A girlfriend now  THESE DAYS, so I STOPPED don't goING. there. And BECAUSE I PREFER NOT TO don't like going to watch movies with men MALE friends, when I WE meet, my men friends, there are many many interesting things we ENJOY DOING play pleasantly instead of watching movies. I like big scale movies such as SF, war, action. Therefore, when I watch movies in my room with my laptop, I can't feel reality with that kind of movies. My favorite movie is AVATAR. After I watched the movie FOR THE first time, I was surprised AMAZED BY about the effects, scale, AND graphicS. It is WAS A totally fantastic movie!

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