My Work, My Company

James,

Merry Monday! Well, I was really surprised when I saw your message here but I am also happy that you sent me a message even if you are quite busy with work. So, thank you so much. However, I would like to advice you to write messages from Monday to Thursday, so that I can easily reply to them within 24 hours. And I would not advice you to write messages on Fridays because there is a big chance that I won't be able to see them before I leave the office and I might not be able to check my homepage on weekends. Though, I truly admire the effort that you are putting in class. I can't thank you enough for that.

On the other hand, I am really amazed with your company and I know that it is not impossible for Samsung Electronics and Samsung SDS to be at the top when it comes to IT service. Well, I think I'm writting so many things again and you might be busy with work so I'll end this message now.  So, I'll talk to you again in class!^^, Take care! 

P.S. James, I noted some corrections with your sentences and you can check them below this message. I truly can't wait to hear your voice and answers later. See you!^^,

Lots of love,
Audrey.

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Corrections:

[My Work] The company I work for SDS.
>> The company that I am working for is Samsung SDS.

 It is located in Jamsil of seoul. 
>> It is located in Jamsil, Seoul. 

It takes about one hour from my house. 
>> It is an hour away from my house.

Our company provides IT service to customers.
>> Correct.

 We listen to what they want and what is problem.
>> We give solution to their problems and listen to their needs.

Then we construct architecture to solve the problem.
>> So, we provide an excellent and quality service.

 We develop, provide and maintain IT service.
>> In addition, we also develop and maintain good IT service.

 I think SDS is the No.1 IT Company in Korea. 
>> I honestly think that SDS is the No. 1 IT Company in Korea.

SDS is good at outsourcing but we don’t have uniqueness of technology. 
>> SDS is good at outsourcing but we lack competitiveness when it comes to developing technology.

We need to prepare our own technologies to grow global company. 
>> We need to think and produce our own unique technilogies for international market.

[My Company] SDS is founded 1985. 
>> On the other hand, I'll tell you about the history of my company. SDS is founded way back  in 1985.

When SDS was founded I was just in elementary school. 
>> I was just in elementary school during that time.

But I knew what is first popular product in our company. That is Unitel.
>>  But I can already remember the most popular product in SDS and that is Unitel.

 It is portal service. There I can check my email, read news, write a text on the forums. 
>> It was a portal service where you can check e-mails, read news and write text on forums.

Our company’s vision is global No. 1 IT service. 
>> By the way, our company's vision is to become the No. 1 It service in the world.

Our catchphrase is “smart answer” When our customer asked something, We’ll give a smart answer to solve the problem.
>> Our company's catchphrase is 'Smart Answer'. We give the best possible answer to the customer's concern.

***********Hey! Thanks a lot for introducing your company to me!^^, I really did appreciate it!