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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 10. 19 조회 13975

Review

작성자: 1101786493 담당 튜터: Celine
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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The topic is interesting and it seems to be meaninful to Malaysian. However, introduction and literature review should be revised. Introduction needs to be added the problems of current information skill test and importance of information skill test.

Methodology seems to be sound.

Iimitation and implications should be added.
튜터 교정 답변

Hi Sun, happy Monday to you! I hope you had a great weekend and talk to you later.

 

-T. Celine^^ 

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The topic is interesting and it seems to be meaninful to Malaysian. 

>> The topic is interesting and it seems meaningful to Malaysian. 

 

However, introduction and literature review should be revised. 

>> However, the introduction and literature review should be revised. 

 

Introduction needs to be added the problems of current information skill test and importance of information skill test. 

>> The introduction needs to be added the problems of current information skill test and importance of information skill test. 

 

Methodology seems to be sound. 

>> Methodology seems was founded.

 

Iimitation and implications should be added.

>> The limitations and implications should be added.

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