About my house
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Let me tell you about my house. I live in apartment with my family. My unit is located on 16th floor in my apartment building which has 20-story. My home has four bed rooms, two bath rooms.
My children have their own room in which we have placed a desk, a chair, a bed and a wordrobe. My wife and i use the largest room together. This room has no furniture except one bed because it has a small dress room. The other is used as guest room for my parents' visiting. Let's move on the living room. It is equiped a large smart TV and small audio system. My family usually enjoy watching movie on this TV through online streaming service. It's very warm in winter and cool in summer in the living room because the direction of this is toward to south. I alway wanted to live large apartment and my home is the result of my dream. But after three years when we moved here, I felt that this is too large for my family. So I think it would be better to move smaller than now.
My children have their own room in which we have placed a desk, a chair, a bed and a wordrobe. My wife and i use the largest room together. This room has no furniture except one bed because it has a small dress room. The other is used as guest room for my parents' visiting. Let's move on the living room. It is equiped a large smart TV and small audio system. My family usually enjoy watching movie on this TV through online streaming service. It's very warm in winter and cool in summer in the living room because the direction of this is toward to south. I alway wanted to live large apartment and my home is the result of my dream. But after three years when we moved here, I felt that this is too large for my family. So I think it would be better to move smaller than now.
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