Pet
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Actually, I didn't have a chance to raise a pet.
I mean, except for the birds in cage, that the things walk in four foots.
I like small pets like a dog or a cat, but I am a little bit scared about the bigger one sized like a half of adult. because I got a bite from my friend's dog.
Anyway, I think that it's very difficult to raise something.
you have to feed them, and you have to wash them, and you have to bring them to hospital, and you have to pass them away.
I remember that I pestered my parents for adopting a pet when I was a child.
but my mom didn't allow me at that time.
Although Now I became at the status of deciding this issue, I am not raising something.
I choosed clean house without the hair of animals.
I mean, except for the birds in cage, that the things walk in four foots.
I like small pets like a dog or a cat, but I am a little bit scared about the bigger one sized like a half of adult. because I got a bite from my friend's dog.
Anyway, I think that it's very difficult to raise something.
you have to feed them, and you have to wash them, and you have to bring them to hospital, and you have to pass them away.
I remember that I pestered my parents for adopting a pet when I was a child.
but my mom didn't allow me at that time.
Although Now I became at the status of deciding this issue, I am not raising something.
I choosed clean house without the hair of animals.
튜터 교정 답변
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