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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Today, It's been rainning all day and It's hazy and foggy a little bit.
so, people are walking around with umbrellas in colorful.I don't lik rainning cause,
we can't hang around while rainning and it feels like dark and gloomy. so, i hope that
we can see deep blue sky as rich as blue ocean ater rainning.
And i feel the seasong is changing, nowdays. it meaans the winter is coming soon.
The seasons usually change ater bout of rainning seasong.
so, people are walking around with umbrellas in colorful.I don't lik rainning cause,
we can't hang around while rainning and it feels like dark and gloomy. so, i hope that
we can see deep blue sky as rich as blue ocean ater rainning.
And i feel the seasong is changing, nowdays. it meaans the winter is coming soon.
The seasons usually change ater bout of rainning seasong.
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