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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
In winter, we have snowing and people like to go mountain for go sking and boarding.
This winter, I purchased season free pass ticket for sking, so i can't wait the winter is coming..
In spring.. we can smell flowers all over the fields and variety of flowers start to bloom at spring,
so people usually go picinic and take good pictures with beatiful spring scenes.
and summer is really hot and sizzling.. i mean not only temperature is hot, but also people's fashion and wearing is really hot..
people darely exposure part of their bodies and show off their well balanced body during summer season. that's why we love summer.. next summer Im doing exercise harder so im goning to make my body well..
This winter, I purchased season free pass ticket for sking, so i can't wait the winter is coming..
In spring.. we can smell flowers all over the fields and variety of flowers start to bloom at spring,
so people usually go picinic and take good pictures with beatiful spring scenes.
and summer is really hot and sizzling.. i mean not only temperature is hot, but also people's fashion and wearing is really hot..
people darely exposure part of their bodies and show off their well balanced body during summer season. that's why we love summer.. next summer Im doing exercise harder so im goning to make my body well..
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