About my Company
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I have been working for Samsung SDS which is a IT service leading Company in korea.
Samsung SDS was launched in 1985.
We offers a diverse array of services such as IT Consulting, System Development, System operation
and IT infrastructure services.
Our headquaters are located in Seoul
and There are many branches overseas.
In these days, my company is trying to expand our business to Global market
sometimes, I have a chance working with foreign employees. so, I try to learn English to work with global customers and partners
We have many business experiecnes accumulated from working with
major enterprises and public organizations, domestically and internationally.
There are more than ten thousand employees working in my company.
I think that the most important assets are vast business experiences,
accumulated knowledge and professional experts.
Overall I enjoy working at SAMSUNG SDS very much.
i believe my company is promising.
Samsung SDS was launched in 1985.
We offers a diverse array of services such as IT Consulting, System Development, System operation
and IT infrastructure services.
Our headquaters are located in Seoul
and There are many branches overseas.
In these days, my company is trying to expand our business to Global market
sometimes, I have a chance working with foreign employees. so, I try to learn English to work with global customers and partners
We have many business experiecnes accumulated from working with
major enterprises and public organizations, domestically and internationally.
There are more than ten thousand employees working in my company.
I think that the most important assets are vast business experiences,
accumulated knowledge and professional experts.
Overall I enjoy working at SAMSUNG SDS very much.
i believe my company is promising.
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