Watching movies
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I live various type of movie genres except horror movies.
I extremely hate horror movies.
I don't believe existing of a ghost but after watching this kind of movie I couldn't sleep well because I feel like someone looking at me, and standing behind me.
When I was 15, I have a chance to see a horror movie called 'Under the dark water'
This movie is made from Japan. The story of this movie is a woman and her daughter moved in to the old apartment and there is a girl who died with resentment.
Because of the died girl a woman and her daughter die in the water tank which is located in the rooftop of the apartment.
I was afraid of the images and the sounds from that movie.
I am very coward at ordinary times so I always turn on the lights when I go to bed.
Without lights I can't fall a sleep.
Therefore after wathing a horror movies this symptom is become worse.
I wish that I could get the courage to watch a whole horror movie without closing my eyes or screaming.
I extremely hate horror movies.
I don't believe existing of a ghost but after watching this kind of movie I couldn't sleep well because I feel like someone looking at me, and standing behind me.
When I was 15, I have a chance to see a horror movie called 'Under the dark water'
This movie is made from Japan. The story of this movie is a woman and her daughter moved in to the old apartment and there is a girl who died with resentment.
Because of the died girl a woman and her daughter die in the water tank which is located in the rooftop of the apartment.
I was afraid of the images and the sounds from that movie.
I am very coward at ordinary times so I always turn on the lights when I go to bed.
Without lights I can't fall a sleep.
Therefore after wathing a horror movies this symptom is become worse.
I wish that I could get the courage to watch a whole horror movie without closing my eyes or screaming.
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