Favorite movie star

James,

Tremendous Tuesday!  Well, thank you for introducing your favorite actor to me. In my case, I also like him because he is not only good at acting but he is also a dedicated environmentalist. I remembered that he was one of the first actors who got involve in taking care of our planet. I believe that he created the Leonardo DiCaprio Foundation in 1998 (If you want to learn more about it then you can visit this website http://www.worldwildlife.org/leaders/leonardo-dicaprio).  

On the other hand, I would like you to meet my favorite actor. His name is Joseph Morgan. He is an English actor who supports Positive Women (it is an organization that focuses in improving the lives of women and children in Swaziland by meeting their basic needs and empower them to secure a better future). Well, I would like to say that Joseph is as good as Leo when it comes to acting but he isn’t. Ha! Ha! Ha! I’m so mean. Ha! Ha! Ha! But seriously, I like him because he uses is popularity to help and inspire people who are in need!^^, I hope someday I could also share what I have to others!^^, Well, I’m writing so many things again so, I’ll end this letter now.^^, Take care James!^^,

P.S. Thank you for sharing this interesting facts about Leo DiCaprio!^^, I’ll see you later in class!^^,

Lots of love,

Audrey.

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Corrections:

My favorite movie star is Leonardo Dicaprio.

>> Correct.

He is an American actor and film producer.

>> Correct.

He was born in 1974.

>> Correct.

When I first saw Leo, I was about 18 years old.

>> I was about 18 years old when I first saw Leo in a movie.

I watched the movie, “Romeo & Juliet”. I thought he was a reincarnation of Romeo.

>> It was Romeo and Juliet. During that time, I really thought that he was the reincarnation of Romeo’s character.

He gained international fame in James Cameron's Titanic.

>> Though, he gained international recognition in James Cameron’s movie, Titanic.

I knew this movie is commercially success at the top five in the world.

>> I remembered this movie was a big hit and became the top five highest grossing film of all time.

 He has been nominated for five Academy Awards and ten Golden Globe Awards.

>> Also, he was nominated for five Academy Awards and ten Golden Globes for this movie.

When he was young, he was very handsome.

>> He was the most popular and handsome actor of his time.

 But he didn’t rely on his appearance.

>> Correct.

He focused on his acting skills. He also tried to perform different genre & character.

>> Instead, he focused on improving his acting skills and played different genres and characters.

 It is the reason why I like Leonardo Dicaprio. ps.

>> And that is the reason why I admire Leonardo DiCaprio.

Thank you for your kindness~ Audely.

>> P.S. Thank you for you kindness Audrey.

**************I also like Leo DiCaprio! I think that he is one of the greatest actors and environmentalist of his time!^^,