My Weekend
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학생 제출 원문
Ok, I will tell you about what I do on weekends.
Usually I am busy with work and I can’t help my wife on weekdays.
So I do some house chores on weekends such as taking out the garbage, cleaning the floor an so on.
And, I do several things which are my favorites.
First of all, I like exercise, so I often go to the park to play basketball or jogging.
Also, I sometimes go to the mountain with my family in the early morning.
After climbing the mountain, we go to the famous restaurant to eat lunch.
Finally, my wife and I enjoy shopping. We have interest in passion, so we spend enough time in shopping occasionally and when I find my favorite style clothes, I will buy that clothes.
That’s the end of my story.
Usually I am busy with work and I can’t help my wife on weekdays.
So I do some house chores on weekends such as taking out the garbage, cleaning the floor an so on.
And, I do several things which are my favorites.
First of all, I like exercise, so I often go to the park to play basketball or jogging.
Also, I sometimes go to the mountain with my family in the early morning.
After climbing the mountain, we go to the famous restaurant to eat lunch.
Finally, my wife and I enjoy shopping. We have interest in passion, so we spend enough time in shopping occasionally and when I find my favorite style clothes, I will buy that clothes.
That’s the end of my story.
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