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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 10. 21 조회 13288

My homework!!

작성자: 72153 담당 튜터: Jae
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear. Teacher J.

You said that I must do homework!!
first, Here is

- polish : I make my son polish my new shoes.
- willfully : willfully, I'm late for appointment with her.
- stealing : at 1910, japan is to take away the land of my contry.
clearly, that is stealing!!
- goof : it's my mistake!
maybe, I am goof!

I thank for your comments about my grammer!
I will try to reading a english books!!
thank!!
튜터 교정 답변

Dear. Teacher J. 

You said that I must do homework!! first,

Here is - polish : I make my son polish my new shoes. 

- willfully : willfully, I'm late for appointment with her.

*Willful (adjective)

: refusing to change your ideas or opinions or to stop doing something

  • a stubborn and willful child
: done deliberately : INTENTIONAL
  • He has shown a willful disregard for other people's feelings.
  • willful disobedience/murder

- willfully

 adverb
  • The press willfully ignored the facts of the case.

- stealing : at 1910, japan is to take away the land of my contry. clearly, that is stealing!!

Correction: In 1910, Japan took away the land of my country. Clearly, that is stealing!

- goof : it's my mistake! maybe, I am goof! 

I thank for your comments about my grammer!

Correction: Thank you for your comments and corrections about my grammar.

I will try to reading a english books!! thank!!

Correction: I will try to read English books. Thanks! :)

MESSAGE:

Hi Shawn,

Thank you so much for doing your homework. :)

I can see your dedication and enthusiasm to learn more. That's great!

I'm sorry that we haven't finished our conversation because we were running out of time. 

I am always looking forward to more chances to talk with you.

Have a wonderful Tuesday! See you next class! ^_^

Take care, 
Teacher Jae ♥

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