Playing Sports
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I am not good at Sports. I think the reason is mainly because I have not experienced a lot of sports in my childhood. But, talking about baseball, I have some experience in my elementary school days. I played with my brothers and neighborhoods. We usually played in the ground, sometimes in the park, sometimes in the empty space between houses. But the game was not full scope, that means we never played the game with 9 cross 9 members. Because, there were not so many people in my neighborhood. We usually played 3 to 3. Sometimes 4 to 4. For the protectors' side, one boy pitcher, one boy catcher, the others were baseball keepers.
I recall some happening. One day my elder brother exercised hitting, I was watching his move, but without noticing I had hit on my head with his bat. I was astonished with sudden attack.
But, be grateful for small mercies however, the injury was not so severe.
I recall some happening. One day my elder brother exercised hitting, I was watching his move, but without noticing I had hit on my head with his bat. I was astonished with sudden attack.
But, be grateful for small mercies however, the injury was not so severe.
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