Swimming
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
When I was young I am not so active to learn any kind of sports. So I did not learn how to swim for long time. In my highschool days I studied in the school in the summer vacation period. From the 1st grade of school, I prepared university exam.
My school had a swimming pool, and opened everyday for the summer vacation period.
A lot of people were swimming. After I swum, I used to study in front of my desk. Main subject was Mathematics, English, Korean others was Science including Physics, Chemistry, Biology and Geology. After swimming, I usually sleep one hour crouching on my desk.
My friend just taught me how to start swim. When I was in the water holding breadth for swimming lesson, my friend were at play bunting me. I was drowned for a while and drank little water.
My school had a swimming pool, and opened everyday for the summer vacation period.
A lot of people were swimming. After I swum, I used to study in front of my desk. Main subject was Mathematics, English, Korean others was Science including Physics, Chemistry, Biology and Geology. After swimming, I usually sleep one hour crouching on my desk.
My friend just taught me how to start swim. When I was in the water holding breadth for swimming lesson, my friend were at play bunting me. I was drowned for a while and drank little water.
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