presentation R4
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Good morning to everyone. My name is kyung eun Hwang, and I'm the senior engineer at Smart Town department at Samsung SDS. I very much appreciate
this opportunity to provide you a brief presentation on the hospitality and
Information & Communication Technology (ICT) services which could be
incorporated into your business.
The essence of this subject has been designed for those among you who are developers and consultants having no or less experience of the hospitality project.
As the technology grows day-by-day, ICT trends dramatically changes with new features and capabilities, and ICT is applied in the hospitality industry as an important strategic asset. Therefore it is essential to seek advice from the ICT consultant.
Through this presentation, I want to assure you that our company ,Samsung SDS, has great capabilities to be your ICT consultant and solution provider, and it will lead you to achieve the successful business in hospitality industry.
this opportunity to provide you a brief presentation on the hospitality and
Information & Communication Technology (ICT) services which could be
incorporated into your business.
The essence of this subject has been designed for those among you who are developers and consultants having no or less experience of the hospitality project.
As the technology grows day-by-day, ICT trends dramatically changes with new features and capabilities, and ICT is applied in the hospitality industry as an important strategic asset. Therefore it is essential to seek advice from the ICT consultant.
Through this presentation, I want to assure you that our company ,Samsung SDS, has great capabilities to be your ICT consultant and solution provider, and it will lead you to achieve the successful business in hospitality industry.
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