My favorite music
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My favorite music is 'Variation on the Cannon'. The origin of the song was composed by Pachebel who is 17 century's musician. But nowdays it is more famous as revised piano music by Gerge Winston in 1980's. If you don't know this song, you must be younger than 40 year's old. Because it was popular in the world in 1980's. After returning home from stressful work office, I listen to the music alone. It helps my mind feel much relieved while listening. In general, all type of songs have bored when it is listened repeatedly, but this song is always fresh. I listened it first at 20 years old, so it reminders me of the memory of my youth. First of this song is very slow, but the tempo has become fast and cheerful.
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