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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 10. 23 조회 14468

My favorite music 2

작성자: 1460555 담당 튜터: Charlanna2
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When listening, I feel like standing in a big forest or big grand mountain. I feel deep valley, wild waves of water, cool wind sounds and birds sounds. This is the reason why I stick to the song. I recommend to listen this piano music through internet or Utuve. You can find out whether my comment is overstated or not.
튜터 교정 답변

When I'm listening to this song, I feel like I'm standing in a big forest or on top of a grand mountain. It's almost like I can hear wild waves of water, a cool wind blowing and birds chirping. This is the reason why I stick to this song. I recommend that everyone listen to this song; it can be located on the internet or Youtube. Listening to the song will enable you to confirm if my opinion is valid.

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