Jogging/Walking
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I used to walk along Han River about 2 to 3 hours in the weekends, because Han River is near my house. Sometimes in the morning while going to office or in the evening coming home I usally walk through streets about 30 minutes. When walking through the street a lot of car smoking out, and I should endure some dust outside. But I believe it is good for me. In the summer time because the sun is too shiny, walking is difficult.
In the lunch time I walk about 30 minutes a day. Sometimes walk alone, sometimes walk together.
When walking alone, I use the time studying Chinese. To do this, I always listen to MP3 on my cellphone. When walking together with my co-workers, usually talk together while walking.
In work day I planed one hour for a day. But if it rainy, I cannot walk. In the summer time I cannot walk during lunch time because of too much sweat.
In the lunch time I walk about 30 minutes a day. Sometimes walk alone, sometimes walk together.
When walking alone, I use the time studying Chinese. To do this, I always listen to MP3 on my cellphone. When walking together with my co-workers, usually talk together while walking.
In work day I planed one hour for a day. But if it rainy, I cannot walk. In the summer time I cannot walk during lunch time because of too much sweat.
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