Introduction
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, i'm sheva and im working in theme park as mechanical engineer.
im belonging facility group and im charge in engineering fiels.
So, mathmatics, science, matrials and construction they are always my close friend all the time while working.
I'm 31 years old and i love diversity and i like to meet new people with different backgrounds as well That's why im still practicing and improving my english skills. And i hope to go aboard someday
after graduation, i've not spoken english for a while but i hope to get a job in aboard someday
so i decided my self to study harder and i need to brush up my english.
nice to meet you
im belonging facility group and im charge in engineering fiels.
So, mathmatics, science, matrials and construction they are always my close friend all the time while working.
I'm 31 years old and i love diversity and i like to meet new people with different backgrounds as well That's why im still practicing and improving my english skills. And i hope to go aboard someday
after graduation, i've not spoken english for a while but i hope to get a job in aboard someday
so i decided my self to study harder and i need to brush up my english.
nice to meet you
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