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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 10. 23 조회 13620

Unit 15 - online shopping

작성자: HWMC201200797 담당 튜터: Wynston2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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I purchased some items several times. I mainly buy a book from internet, because I like to read a electric book. And I can get the book's preview from the website. However, I don't like to buy items from online in most cases. One of the reason is about fake product. When I found something and order it, it was great at internet image. However, I was totally disappointed after the item arrived at my house. It was too different from the image. Therefore, Although there were so many advantage in online shopping such as convenience, I usually don't use internet shopping.
튜터 교정 답변

IN MOST CASES,  DON'T LIKE TO BUY PRODUCTS ONLINE, ALTHOUGH ON SOME OCCASIONS, I WILL PURCHASE AN EBOOK FROM TIME TO TIME, AS I LIKE TO READ, AND BESIDES, I HAVE AN OPPORTUNITY TO PRIEW IT BEFORE I BUY.    I purchased some items several times. I mainly buy a book from internet, because I like to read a electric book. And I can get the book's preview from the website. However, I don't like to buy items from online in most cases. THE MAIN REASON I PREFER NOT TO BUY ONLINE IS BECAUSE OF THE PREVALENT SALE OF One of the reason is about fake productS. When I found VIEW THE BEAUTIFUL IMAGE OF A PRODUCT something and OPT TO order it, it was great at internet image. However, I am OFTEN was totally disappointed after the item arrived at my house. It was IS VERY too different from the DISPLAYED ONLINE image. Therefore, Al Though there were ARE so many advantageS OF  in online shopping such as convenience, I'D RATHER SHOP IN A REGULAR STORE WHERE I AM CONVINCED OF THE ITEM'S QUALITY.   usually don't use internet shopping.

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