Project
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I remember the project in UK when I was a junior in this company.
Actually, the reason why the project remains in my mind is that it was not the project itself, it was my first business trip abroad and it was not so romantic.
I work from 8 to 24, and I had a trouble with my senior.
He was so inflexible and he gave me works that I could not win through due to my lack of training.
Anyway, I and my colleagues went out the beautiful places near our accommodation on weekends.
And I knew that there's a park owned by National Trust which is a something like a Green Peace
who protect nature.
Now, Time in UK has left as memories.
Actually, the reason why the project remains in my mind is that it was not the project itself, it was my first business trip abroad and it was not so romantic.
I work from 8 to 24, and I had a trouble with my senior.
He was so inflexible and he gave me works that I could not win through due to my lack of training.
Anyway, I and my colleagues went out the beautiful places near our accommodation on weekends.
And I knew that there's a park owned by National Trust which is a something like a Green Peace
who protect nature.
Now, Time in UK has left as memories.
튜터 교정 답변
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