Excercise
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
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I was into tennis over 10 years when I was young. But I am not doing it anymore.
Now I like to go trekking. Before I was into trekking, I didn't understand that people go to mountains. Because you are end up down the mountain, it looks non-sense walking hardly up mountain.
At that time, I thought that mountain exists just being looked at by people.
But I realized that mountain is the perfect place for physical and mind.
Koreans go trekking with many foods and drinks in their back pack. They sweat a lot, but get the stress out of their mind, and drink with their friends at the top of the mountain. They feel freedom from their daily choirs and company problems. Same to me.
I was into tennis over 10 years when I was young. But I am not doing it anymore.
Now I like to go trekking. Before I was into trekking, I didn't understand that people go to mountains. Because you are end up down the mountain, it looks non-sense walking hardly up mountain.
At that time, I thought that mountain exists just being looked at by people.
But I realized that mountain is the perfect place for physical and mind.
Koreans go trekking with many foods and drinks in their back pack. They sweat a lot, but get the stress out of their mind, and drink with their friends at the top of the mountain. They feel freedom from their daily choirs and company problems. Same to me.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!