Staying at home during vacations
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I think lazy people like to stay at home.
The benefit of staying at home is not worring about making any plan.
Sometimes I think I am tired, I stay home.
I like watching TV, I can watch old movies in some cable TVs.
Or I can watch some movies from internet.
Sometimes I watch DVD American TV series like "Lost" from moring to night.
I can play baduk game through internet. I can sleep 2 to 3 hours at home.
When I think staying at home is meaningless and I am lazy, I try to go outside. Sometimes I walk about 2 to 3 hours besides Han River. Sometimes go some suburban area near Seoul in the morning and come back in the evening.
The benefit of staying at home is not worring about making any plan.
Sometimes I think I am tired, I stay home.
I like watching TV, I can watch old movies in some cable TVs.
Or I can watch some movies from internet.
Sometimes I watch DVD American TV series like "Lost" from moring to night.
I can play baduk game through internet. I can sleep 2 to 3 hours at home.
When I think staying at home is meaningless and I am lazy, I try to go outside. Sometimes I walk about 2 to 3 hours besides Han River. Sometimes go some suburban area near Seoul in the morning and come back in the evening.
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