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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 03. 04 조회 11997

self introduction

작성자: 1100359767 담당 튜터: Faith2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello, my name is JunBeom Park and my English name is Noel that means Christmas. I chose it as my
English name because my birthday is the same day as Christmas. I was born on December, 25th, 1981.
I am in my early 30s. And I am a single.
I have been working for SAMSUNG SDS for 6 years since 2008 as a programmer. My job is developing a
web solution and it needs a lot of technologies. So I should read a lot of books related with technologies and apply it to my job. I work sitting on my chair all day but it is very exciting.
In my free time, I learn playing a violin and read a book. sometimes I watch a movie at home or theater alone. I'm introvertied and thoughtful. That's it.
If you have a question, feel free to ask me!
튜터 교정 답변
Hello, my name is JunBeom Park and my English name is Noel that means Christmas. I chose it as my English name because my birthday is on the same day as Christmas. I was born on December 25th, 1981. I am in my early 30s. And I am single. I have been working for SAMSUNG SDS for 6 years since 2008 as a programmer. My job is developing a web solution and it needs a lot of technologies so, I should read a lot of books related to technologies and apply it to my job. I work sitting on my chair all day but it is very exciting. In my free time, I learn playing a violin and read a book. sometimes I watch a movie at home or in the theater alone. I'm am an introvert and thoughtful person. That's it. If you have a question, feel free to ask me!
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