Dancing
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I didn't learn how to dance. But when I was in highschool days, I went to the picnic. A classmate asked me to dance in front of the whole class. I was no alternative but to dance. I danced without thinking. I moved my arms, legs and hip as natural as possible. Some friends said it was nice. After that moment, I thought dancing was not so difficult as I imagined. After that, I happened to go dancing club, I tried my motion following the rhythm of the music. I saw other people were dancing, they did not have special technique. So I totally recovered my self-confidence.
Whenever some cheerful music is coming, I feel like to dance automatically.
In these days people seldom have chances to dance, they don't want to move a lot any more.
I suddenly recall the movie "Mr. and Mrs. Smith", they were spies and were happily dancing.
Whenever some cheerful music is coming, I feel like to dance automatically.
In these days people seldom have chances to dance, they don't want to move a lot any more.
I suddenly recall the movie "Mr. and Mrs. Smith", they were spies and were happily dancing.
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