Cooking
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Now, As we have the Internet, I usually invite my friends to dinner at my house through SNS.
I write the post on my Facebook about when and where the dinner will be.
Also, when I am in a hurry, I make a chat room on Kakaotalk which is the most famous SNS in Korea.
As a matter of fact, I always try to make a delicious dish to my friends but I am a bad cook.
However, The only thing I can make is Kimchizigae, which is Korean traditional soup.
As I told you before this is the only thing that I can make so, the reaction of my friends also really good. Even more if they get a chance my dish, they would gennerally crazy about my dish and want to eat more.
Sincerely last weekend I made Kimchizigae for my friend, minji. After eating she also satisfied with my dish.
So, I decided I will learn more about how to cook the other dishes for my friends.
I write the post on my Facebook about when and where the dinner will be.
Also, when I am in a hurry, I make a chat room on Kakaotalk which is the most famous SNS in Korea.
As a matter of fact, I always try to make a delicious dish to my friends but I am a bad cook.
However, The only thing I can make is Kimchizigae, which is Korean traditional soup.
As I told you before this is the only thing that I can make so, the reaction of my friends also really good. Even more if they get a chance my dish, they would gennerally crazy about my dish and want to eat more.
Sincerely last weekend I made Kimchizigae for my friend, minji. After eating she also satisfied with my dish.
So, I decided I will learn more about how to cook the other dishes for my friends.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!