Jogging
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear Wynston
Mr.Wynston.
I heard that you are jogging as fast as or more fast than younger people.
Even more stunning myself was that you are sixty years old man.
It was a surprise because I could feel energy from your voice that could not be experienced generally from other people around your age.
Even I reminded hollywood super stars who stay in good shape.
You know, I drink often and smoke over twenty years.
Nowadays, I think I am taking good influences from you like values for health, life and happiness.
I think I need to change.
My best regards,
Jongmoo Lee.
Mr.Wynston.
I heard that you are jogging as fast as or more fast than younger people.
Even more stunning myself was that you are sixty years old man.
It was a surprise because I could feel energy from your voice that could not be experienced generally from other people around your age.
Even I reminded hollywood super stars who stay in good shape.
You know, I drink often and smoke over twenty years.
Nowadays, I think I am taking good influences from you like values for health, life and happiness.
I think I need to change.
My best regards,
Jongmoo Lee.
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