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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 10. 29 조회 12706

Eating Out

작성자: 118406 담당 튜터: Wynston2
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Usually every weekdays I eat out, but every weekends I like homemade food. My family seldom have a chance to eat out except some ceremony. Instead, sometimes on my way home, I buy some cakes or pizza, my two sons like them very much.
I remember a Thai restaurant, I went there at least 3 times in a week. Thai restaurant provided some rice noddle and side dishes. Some are made of vegitables, at that time I went there with customers. I still remember the taste of them. The restaurant's interior decoration was also good. Side dishes had abundant taste. But Thai restaurant doesn't provide any dessert, so we should pay extra money for them.
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Usually every weekday I eat out, but every ON weekends I like homemade food. My family seldom have HAS a chance to eat out except some ceremony. Instead, sometimes on my way home, I buy some cakes or pizza, my two sons like them very much. I remember a Thai restaurant, I went there at least 3 times in a week. Thai restaurant provided some rice noddle and side dishes. Some are made of vegitables, at that time I went there with customers. I still remember the taste of them. The restaurant's interior decoration was also good. Side dishes had abundant taste. But Thai restaurant doesn't provide any dessert, so we should pay extra money for them.

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MY FAMILY SELDOM HAS AN OPPORTUNITY TO EAT OUT, OTHER THAN WHEN ATTENDING CEREMONIES EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE, THOUGH ON RETURN FROM WORK, I BRING HOME CAKE AND PIZZA FOR MY SONS WHO LIKE THEM VERY MUCH.  PERSONALLY, I EAT OUT ON WORK DAYS, BUT PREFER HOMECOOKING ON WEEKENDS.  I USED TO EAT OUT WITH COMPANY CUSTOMERS AT A THAI RESTAURANT SEVERAL TIMES A WEEK, WHICH SERVED RICE NOODLES AND SIDE DISHES; SOME MADE WITH VEGETABLES. I STILL HAVE FOND MEMORIES OF THEIR TASTE, AND THE DECOR OF THE RESTARUANTS INTERIOR WAS QUITE APPEALING.  THEY DID NOT HOWEVER, PROVIDE DESSERTS (WHICH WOULD HAVE COST EXTRA).

 

*** ALVIN IT HAS BEEN A GREAT PLEASURE WORKING WITH YOU.  ALWAYS REMEMBER TO USE YOUR THESAURUS (AS I DID ABOVE), TO ENHANCE, AND EXPAND YOUR VOCABULARY.  TEACHER WYNSTON 

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