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Hi, J

작성자: 72153 담당 튜터: Jae
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear j,

Hello!

I have heared "Hello, Good Afternoon!" at 1:20 pm accurate in the past two months.

And I am happy during talking times because I was able to escape from the my difficult problems at "that time".

I can talk with foreigner because You understand my words better.
So I am very grateful to you.

I will register the class in December again, resting a month.

Then I hope you to be my teacher.

Thank, my Teacher.
튜터 교정 답변

Dear j, Hello! I have heared "Hello, Good Afternoon!" at 1:20 pm accurate in the past two months.

And I am happy during talking times because I was able to escape from the my difficult problems at "that time".

I can talk with foreigner because You understand my words better.

So I am very grateful to you.

I will register the class in December again, resting a month.

Then I hope you to be my teacher. Thank, my Teacher.

MESSAGE:

Hi Shawn,

I feel so happy whenever I have a class with you. I truly appreciate that you find time to read my corrections and comments on the study page. Thank you so much Shawn. 

I'm lucky to have a kind and nice student like you.  I know that inside Shawn's heart lies an angel. Thanks for your kindness. You'll be blessed! ^_^

Don't worry! We will talk again this December. See you soon! :)

Take care, 
Teacher Jae ♥

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